British Castle Facts

A Thursday Afternoon

A Thursday Afternoon
 After at big at school (the swimming sports). I went to the orthodontist ( A orthodontist is dentist that correct your teeth and jaw ) the orthodontist checked my teeth and said to my parents and I. “ I think Advika needs plates can you come in the middle of may”, said the orthodontist “ I’ll take some x rays some we the plate”.




 I Can’t believe it I was going to have plates!! After the check up we new restaurant in the crowded city. There were cars on the way to city . There was lots traffic because lots people were returning home to their families to be continued…

I like ur vocab u need to reread your writing next time because i needed to fix up a lot of things shreya

Castles

What are castles ?
Castles were places where people lived .People lived so that they could be protected by enemies.Medieval castles were mostly built in England.Medieval castles were built during the time of Norman Conquest, which began 1066,until early Tudor period in 1484.Castle were built hundreds year ago.Castles were built by wealthy kings and queens.The royal family lived in castles also knights,maids villagers and wealthy people.


  Moats
Moats was a deep ditch filled with water. The purpose is to keep enemies for invading the castles.So they will have trouble crossing the moat.

Dungeon
A dungeon is strong prison cell that is usually under castle.The dungeon where prisoner is punished for betraying their ruler.


The Keep The keep is the safest place in a castle.During battles the royal family stay in the keep to keep safe from enemies. The keep is within the castle grounds.

I am Samantha have read your I like how you used adjective Advika.next time you should add more sentences.

Easttle Writing

A holiday in London

 It all started in London in the early morning.After I had breakfast, my family and I walked through the crowded streets of London.There  were not many cars but it was full people and buses especially double decker. After we walked for miles we stopped a road that was red.Next to the road was the Buckingham Palace! My mum took photos of the palace and statue of Queen Victoria.Eventually the grand parade began.It was crowded with soldiers some soldiers played some instruments.Some carried guns.After the parade was finished I  listen to my brother’s boring jokes ( he thinks it hilarious) Eventually my brother fell asleep and my dad thought he was not sleeping because he was walking while sleeping.My dad carried him through the strong wind.Later that day my aunty and cousin picked us up and we made our way to my aunty’s house in the outskirts of London.The next day we would make our way to Auckland.It was the best family holiday ever.

The Door Behind The Waterfall

Explain everything

Now I am in year 5 this is my first explain everything in year 5. Hope you enjoy.

Coyote and the Turtle

This week I made poster about the Coyote and the Turtle. I used adjectives from text to describe the coyte and the turtle.Then I used my inferencing skills to describe the coyote and the turtle.