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The family joyfully walked up the steep hill almost reaching the top, but leaving behind the never-ending forest.
The river rapidly rushed down barely giving the riders a break.
Splash! Down the paddles go making kayak‘s quickly zoom through the water, almost reaching the shore.
As the salty sea peacefully sways in cool summer breeze the fishing rod goes down, then something starts to pull extremely hard.
The leaves russel loudly as the swing goes up and down like a never-ending beat coming from Africain drums.
Screaming spreads far in the outside air as the roller coaster unexpectedly makes extreme turns like it’s out of control.
Great use of adverbs Advika and creative complex sentences! - Mrs Taege
ReplyDeleteI liked how you added adjectives and added detail to your work! KEEP IT UP!!!
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