Tuesday, September 24, 2019

Sometimes I Wonder

Sometimes I Wonder
Sometimes I wonder if my ancestors learned to draw and paint like or did they learn more and more. I feel so happy to know that my ancestors were educated enough to teach the generation after them

It's like the tree, the roots are our ancestors, the trunk is our grandparents/ great grandparents, the branches are parents, aunties, and uncles and finally, the leaves are our generation that we are living in right now.

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Thursday, August 15, 2019

The life cycle of a frog

The life cycle of a frog
Did you know that a frog has a life cycle ? All living things have life cycle for example plants the start little then they grow up into big tree. Life cycle means a of series of stages of a living beings.
At first the female frog lays hundreds of eggs.Next the male frog fertilize the egg.Some egg get damaged due to rainfall and wind some eggs don’t survive.The eggs have protective layer called the spawn The male doesn't fertilize all the  eggs so some don’t hatch.
In a few weeks the eggs hatch and tadpoles come out.The tapoles feast on there eggs.After few days the tapole grows exteral gills just like a fish.Then the tapole tail elongates.       To be continued…

Advika I like how you have explaind how a life cycle works. by Sauviri

Wednesday, August 7, 2019

Decimail

Climate Change

Climate Change
Have you heard about climate  change.Climate change is when countries experience changes in there climate and weather.Climate change when earth's temperature changes.There can be drastic weather changes such as the amount of rainfall or the amount of wind and sun in the place.
There are 2 types of climate change one type climate is natural climate change. This is caused by volcanic eruptions ,changes in the sun energy and the earth's orbit.
Human beings cause climate.This started in 1700 hundreds when earthlings built more buildings, cutting down trees ,burnt down coal to make energy,burnt oil to make cars move and growed more rice .This called greenhouse gases.They trap the sun's heat. This makes glaciers and ice sheet melt and makes storms stronger.

Our earth is getting sick.To help your earth make a better a better we can use cars as much and use more public transport.
I Shreya has read your writing i like how you used lots of vocab and ideas

How Auckland recycles rubbish

How Auckland recycles rubbish
How you ever wondered how rubbish is  recycled? 
Your rubbish goes to Visy Recycling centre in Onehunga in Auckland.It is five times bigger than eDid you Aucklanders create 230,00 tons of waste in landfill.
At first rubbish trucks drop of cart loads of rubbish. VISY MRF gets about 200 trucks a day.
A load driver scoops up the recyclables up into a conveyor belt it takes the sorting building.
Very first recycling stage is  the Pre -Sort it is when Sorters pull out non recyclable items off the conveyor .Because it can damage the conveyor belt. 
The rubbish is sorted into different types  using Ingenious technology.To sort glass ,paper and cardboard, aluminium and steel and plastics they use trommels.
Star shape discs flik the paper to separate it..Steel is separated by a magnet.Aluminium is separated  by Eddy magent.Optical conveyor machine sorts different coloured glass. 
After the rubbish is stored paper is send to be remade.Glass is broken.Steel is make into boxes and taken a way to countries to remade.


Shreya have read your writing I.like how you used information and paragraphs  next tiIme you should fix up your .

Wednesday, July 31, 2019

What if Poem

What if...What if...What if…
What if Brent payed for a big rent
 for a cozy little tent. 
What if a zoo truned into a loo. 
What if a cat truned into a bat and 
the bat truned into a rat. 
What if Bod Marley truned into to barley.
What if charlie went to Bail.

What if...What if...What if
I Sanah have read your writhing and I like the way you used good vocab.

Why do stars twinkle?

Why do stars twinkle?
At night have you stared at the sky and you can see the glimmering.But your eyes are tricking. Star don’t scintillate.Its just an opatical illustion.
Stars don’t filker because of the earth’s atomosphere.You can tell  the diffence bettwen a star planet.Because planets don’t twinkle.This because of strong turbulce in the atmosphere.This makes the stars fliker.

I like how you used vocab maybe next time you can work on your spelling shreya


Wednesday, July 24, 2019

Speech judging sheet

Speech Judging Sheet 


Name:                           Topic:                       
                    
Category
Main Points

Self Assessment
Low                                         High
1           2 3           4 5
Structure

  
My speech was organised logically into paragraphs, with an effective introduction and a conclusion.
4
Delivery

  
I used some gestures, stood still and made eye contact with my audience.

My voice was clear and loud.  I didn’t speak too quickly or too slowly.

5
Content 
  
My speech had a message and was original, interesting and relevant to the audience.

5
Language

I used ‘powerful’ words in my speech.  I also included some language features (eg repetition, alliteration, similes etc)
3
Time

My speech was between 2 ½ and 3 ½ minutes long.

4     2min 12s


Next time I need to …slow down to get 2mins and 30s.


Teacher CommentUnique topic, delivered with confidence and expression, good eye contact with your audience.
  • Loved your dramatic start “ there goes a dragon…” this really hooked everyone in straight away.
  • Excellent vocab - neurlogical, vivid, dementia
  • Very informative


Monday, July 1, 2019

Advika’s Key Competencies

    Advika’s Key Competencies 
(the capabilities required for living and lifelong learning)

Halsey Drive School
                     A = Almost Always
                                                                S = Sometimes
                                                           N = Not yet
1st half of the year
2nd half of the year
Student
Teacher
Student
Teacher
Managing Self

I am organised for the day
s
A


I am willing to try new things
s
S


I complete work to the best of my ability and show initiative
s
A


I begin work straight away, stay on task and work independently
A
A


I can set realistic goals and explain how to achieve them
s
S


I make sensible behaviour choices
s
A


I happily take part in all school activities
s
A


Relating to Others

I cooperate well with others when working
A
A


I treat others with respect
A
A


I am a good friend and role model - especially at break times
A
A


I show good manners and cooperate with others
A
A


Participating and Contributing

I share my ideas and opinions with others
S
S


I listen well to other people’s opinions
S
A


I take part in activities outside of the classroom
S
S


Thinking

I ask relevant questions to deepen my knowledge 
N
S


I reflect on my own learning and say what I need to learn next
S
S


Language Symbols and Texts

I use a range of IT to share my learning
A
A



Wednesday, June 19, 2019

Holiday in Cambodia

Holiday in Cambodia
“Thank you for for flying in Thai airwaves” muttered the cabin crew. It was  the school holidays! I took of my coat the sun was blazing hot.My family and l stirred to the airport.
After  all the bag checking we waited for a tuk tuk (a tuk tuk  is a small car with on windows and no door).A tuk tuk had f arrived finally.
Finally, we arrived in the hotel where we were welcomed with bitter and sweet grapefruit juice.After the the reception gave us the key to the room.
The next day  our personal tour guide arrived in an enormous van.” You are going to get hot so I bought  you some iced water” the tour guide said in his Cambodian accent
We arrived in the one and only Angkor Wat.It is the biggest Hindu temple in the world.I was flabbergasted.The temple was in ruins it was full of bulkley trees were taking over.After  we adventured the temple.”I need a break from the fiery sun’ my brother mumbled.
To be counted

I Shreya have read your writing! I like how you  explained day after day clearly! In order to improve you need to work on your spelling!