British Castle Facts

A Thursday Afternoon

A Thursday Afternoon
 After at big at school (the swimming sports). I went to the orthodontist ( A orthodontist is dentist that correct your teeth and jaw ) the orthodontist checked my teeth and said to my parents and I. “ I think Advika needs plates can you come in the middle of may”, said the orthodontist “ I’ll take some x rays some we the plate”.




 I Can’t believe it I was going to have plates!! After the check up we new restaurant in the crowded city. There were cars on the way to city . There was lots traffic because lots people were returning home to their families to be continued…

I like ur vocab u need to reread your writing next time because i needed to fix up a lot of things shreya

Castles

What are castles ?
Castles were places where people lived .People lived so that they could be protected by enemies.Medieval castles were mostly built in England.Medieval castles were built during the time of Norman Conquest, which began 1066,until early Tudor period in 1484.Castle were built hundreds year ago.Castles were built by wealthy kings and queens.The royal family lived in castles also knights,maids villagers and wealthy people.


  Moats
Moats was a deep ditch filled with water. The purpose is to keep enemies for invading the castles.So they will have trouble crossing the moat.

Dungeon
A dungeon is strong prison cell that is usually under castle.The dungeon where prisoner is punished for betraying their ruler.


The Keep The keep is the safest place in a castle.During battles the royal family stay in the keep to keep safe from enemies. The keep is within the castle grounds.

I am Samantha have read your I like how you used adjective Advika.next time you should add more sentences.