A Thursday Afternoon
After at big at school (the swimming sports). I went to the orthodontist ( A orthodontist is dentist that correct your teeth and jaw ) the orthodontist checked my teeth and said to my parents and I. “ I think Advika needs plates can you come in the middle of may”, said the orthodontist “ I’ll take some x rays some we the plate”.
I Can’t believe it I was going to have plates!! After the check up we new restaurant in the crowded city. There were cars on the way to city . There was lots traffic because lots people were returning home to their families to be continued…
I like ur vocab u need to reread your writing next time because i needed to fix up a lot of things shreya
After at big at school (the swimming sports). I went to the orthodontist ( A orthodontist is dentist that correct your teeth and jaw ) the orthodontist checked my teeth and said to my parents and I. “ I think Advika needs plates can you come in the middle of may”, said the orthodontist “ I’ll take some x rays some we the plate”.
I Can’t believe it I was going to have plates!! After the check up we new restaurant in the crowded city. There were cars on the way to city . There was lots traffic because lots people were returning home to their families to be continued…
Interesting...you will have new plates in July?
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