Carpet
“Not again the dog’s muddy paws are making me dirty”,I whispered to myself.When I going to be vacuumed l though to myself.
Creck! I could hear the floor crack underneath me.”I hear voices of children getting louder every minute”, uttered the door.
Ouch! Get of my face please why do you need to stand on my face?There are such thing as mats you can just stand on mats.
Whoops the juice is is all over me .Who tipped the juice on me.This is the second time today.I can finally hear vacuumed cleaner.lt long time since I been vacuumed.
Advika i like how you have used speech marks but to improve your writing you should use more interesting vocab by Sauviri.
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