Jump Jam
I was exicited.Today I go to see Brett (the master of jump jam).He travels to different schools around New zealand. Last year he visited five hundred schools. The year before that he visited four hundred schools.
All children danced with Brett. The teachers came up on stage and danced to the one and only… Coconut song.The last song was from Despicable me.My favorite part of the song was when it goes YMCA.
When the moring tea bell rang kids pervaded around Berrt. It was so congested.Lots fo kids wanted his autograhps.
Advika I like how you have used the word congested in order to improve your writing you should use speech marks by .Sauviri
Advika I like how you have used the word congested in order to improve your writing you should use speech marks by .Sauviri
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